Critique

I showed the rest of the class the work I had done so far to get some feedback, whilst people said they really liked the simplicity of it and the fact that it was in black and white, however there were questions about what my idea really was. Now I think back, I was trying to just be bold, illustrative, but still remain simple. I wonder if I can take this illustration further and make it more about the film. In the film the character Jack is torn between which path to follow, his mothers(faith) or fathers(nature). I will over the weekend print lots of copies on different paper textures, colours, do some chalk drawings, biro, and maybe even try to do some painting to really put across this new concept of torn between faith and nature

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