Second Critique

After trying to do many different versions and taking pictures and really trying to process the picture further to portray my concept, I found myself getting stuck. I decided to wait until my lecture when I would have the chance to show my work to the rest of the class to get feedback. To be honest the feedback wasn’t that great, in hindsight I think it’s because they could see how stuck I was and that really there was nowhere to go with it. After a bit of thought and a sleep on it, I think I need a change of concept and illustration. I feel my original illustration wasn’t doing anything for me except make me feel constricted. I think I will look into the context of the film and explore its cultural background and see if it leads me to anything.

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