As I thought I was finished I though it would be good to show it to a few people and see their opinion. One person said that in the second part of the video the coloured circles with symptoms in said they couldn’t read them all in the time. So I have removed some of the symptoms so there is less for the audience to read.
Also someone else said the background where the flower vectors move and develop cannot really be seen. I don’t want them to be too obvious so I have upped the transparency from 15% to 20%. I have also trimmed the ending as it wasn’t finishing just right.
So here is finally the final piece.